Someone wrote in [personal profile] kumquatix 2011-06-04 07:15 am (UTC)

I love your John with his scrunched up faces and his communicating by not communicating and his Eeyore impersonation at the end there. Oh John! <3

And it's great to see a kink fic with focus on the kink, rather than the orgasms. I really enjoyed that.

The writing is excellent, I only snagged on "Rodney let the warm air from his breath puffs".

~C

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